SHELLEY'S GUITAR - May 10, 2012
Yes Poetry Lovers,
This is the new blogging Aidan, adding footnotes to footsteps as I continue to travel lightly/darkly toward Intelligent Playground in KX.
Just the other day I ran my 'Shelley's Guitar' workshop in a fab Art Nouveau tower in greenest Dorset with a handful of superkool teenagers all open to looking at the interface between orthodox poetics and modern songwriting/rap; to think (and write) about the necessary mix between Dionysian and Apollonian impulses in the artistic furnace.
After anecdotes, discussion and speculation, we ended up with a few sheets of good lines and finally got to chanting these lyrics to backing-tracks and guitar grooves. (Some peeps brought instruments with.) That day we all travelled a long distance, worked ourselves hard on a gritty road. (Big boost to all who were up for the journey, kool runnin's everyone!)
The poem which follows was written the day after the session when I climbed a sunny hill solo and found myself gazing at a herd of dairy cows ranged in a semicircle round me. After a while of keeping still to observe I suddenly realized a strange parallel existed between these four-footed guys in their sunny pasture and the workshop-crew of the previous day - all sprawled on floor-cushions and staring (at first) with nervous interest at the wild figure of an urban poet in their midst, talking like no teacher...
Here's the poem ...
Apollonian Workshop
A semicircle of dumb herd-animals
drooling transparent stuff from chins,
perpetually-chewing, American-style:
reminiscent this morning of other beasts,
yesterday’s fiercer pack of hungover
sixteen-year-old wolves: teenagers,
sleepy, yawning, sceptical, ill-at-ease
under troubled skin, trapped behind
practiced expressions of indifference,
mirror-perfected masks of boredom,
impenetrable walls, generation-gaps,
all the old defences of the innocent.
Ranged also in a crescent like these -
probing vast pink nostrils with tongues -
grumpy, lazing on scattered cushions,
they waited, steaming with impatience,
probably frogmarched to the ordeal,
barked-at in some off-limits bedroom
usually barricaded with audio;
told by the authorities to attend,
ordered for their own good where
culture reaches out to new victims,
boring the tits off everyone.
One particular wolf in bovine clothing,
no poser, on Union Jack floor-cushion
sprawled in scruffy chic, bedhead
carefully pomaded to simulate
the passing of a hurricane across the skull,
growled a greeting almost as guttural
as last-night’s phone-call to Australia
via the porcelain connection,
the cables of spaghetti bolognaise
drooling from the chin with lactic acid:
that regurgitation of the small hours.
Another eyed his potential torturer
as some kind of undercover pedagogue
smuggled into the Easter hols
in a last-ditch parental bid
to kick dyslexic offspring into line.
Then a zither began to sound
from the old days of the citharode;
and cloud-shadows began to slide
across an unfamiliar countryside.
Then rivers began to foam with black
milk from the breasts of a she-wolf
as forty singers sang the circle-ode.
Until the crescent closed suddenly
as shivering voltages changed the world.
And nostrils of the wild beasts flared
as into the distance feral eyes stared,
looking out of time and space
into the mountain-ranges of the god Apollo.
This is the new blogging Aidan, adding footnotes to footsteps as I continue to travel lightly/darkly toward Intelligent Playground in KX.
Just the other day I ran my 'Shelley's Guitar' workshop in a fab Art Nouveau tower in greenest Dorset with a handful of superkool teenagers all open to looking at the interface between orthodox poetics and modern songwriting/rap; to think (and write) about the necessary mix between Dionysian and Apollonian impulses in the artistic furnace.
After anecdotes, discussion and speculation, we ended up with a few sheets of good lines and finally got to chanting these lyrics to backing-tracks and guitar grooves. (Some peeps brought instruments with.) That day we all travelled a long distance, worked ourselves hard on a gritty road. (Big boost to all who were up for the journey, kool runnin's everyone!)
The poem which follows was written the day after the session when I climbed a sunny hill solo and found myself gazing at a herd of dairy cows ranged in a semicircle round me. After a while of keeping still to observe I suddenly realized a strange parallel existed between these four-footed guys in their sunny pasture and the workshop-crew of the previous day - all sprawled on floor-cushions and staring (at first) with nervous interest at the wild figure of an urban poet in their midst, talking like no teacher...
Here's the poem ...
Apollonian Workshop
A semicircle of dumb herd-animals
drooling transparent stuff from chins,
perpetually-chewing, American-style:
reminiscent this morning of other beasts,
yesterday’s fiercer pack of hungover
sixteen-year-old wolves: teenagers,
sleepy, yawning, sceptical, ill-at-ease
under troubled skin, trapped behind
practiced expressions of indifference,
mirror-perfected masks of boredom,
impenetrable walls, generation-gaps,
all the old defences of the innocent.
Ranged also in a crescent like these -
probing vast pink nostrils with tongues -
grumpy, lazing on scattered cushions,
they waited, steaming with impatience,
probably frogmarched to the ordeal,
barked-at in some off-limits bedroom
usually barricaded with audio;
told by the authorities to attend,
ordered for their own good where
culture reaches out to new victims,
boring the tits off everyone.
One particular wolf in bovine clothing,
no poser, on Union Jack floor-cushion
sprawled in scruffy chic, bedhead
carefully pomaded to simulate
the passing of a hurricane across the skull,
growled a greeting almost as guttural
as last-night’s phone-call to Australia
via the porcelain connection,
the cables of spaghetti bolognaise
drooling from the chin with lactic acid:
that regurgitation of the small hours.
Another eyed his potential torturer
as some kind of undercover pedagogue
smuggled into the Easter hols
in a last-ditch parental bid
to kick dyslexic offspring into line.
Then a zither began to sound
from the old days of the citharode;
and cloud-shadows began to slide
across an unfamiliar countryside.
Then rivers began to foam with black
milk from the breasts of a she-wolf
as forty singers sang the circle-ode.
Until the crescent closed suddenly
as shivering voltages changed the world.
And nostrils of the wild beasts flared
as into the distance feral eyes stared,
looking out of time and space
into the mountain-ranges of the god Apollo.